Pieces

Men on the Moon

but what if I died, Mr. Sandman?
would I dream?
would the moon still love me
spending the night?

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10 thoughts on “Men on the Moon

  1. I love the brevity, not for brief sake but for scope sake. (and the multiple levels of “spend the night” so in actuality more than 4 lines are communicated in 4 lines… unless I’m just nuts, which is, of course, a distinct possibility) 🙂

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